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הסרט: section 3.4, the film half, and the essay it is examined by

This topic is the film half of section 3.4 of AQA 7672 and the Paper 2 essay that examines it. The specification prints two films - The Summer of Aviya, directed by Eli Cohen, 1988, and Someone to Run With, directed by Oded Davidoff, 2006 - and permits either one text and one film or two texts. Two films is not an available route, so a candidate studying a film is also studying a prescribed text, and this topic is the sibling of the literary one rather than a replacement for it. The essay is the same shape and the same 40 marks, 20 for AO3 quality of language and 20 for AO4 critical and analytical response, and the specification names camera work in a film as its own example of the form and technique of presentation a candidate must respond to. That is the specific opportunity of the film essay and the specific trap: a film gives you a vocabulary of technique that a novel does not, and it also invites plot narration more strongly than any other form, because a film is easy to remember as a sequence of events. These notes name the two films accurately, invent no plot detail and quote nothing; they teach how to watch a film so that it becomes evidence.

5 sections~28 min reading time4 competenciesLevel Foundation 1 · Standard 1 · Advanced 3

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Exam profile

AO4 · Respond critically and analytically to a prescribed film: 20 marks, for accurate knowledge, evidence from the film, and evaluation of its issues and contextsAO3 · Manipulate the language accurately in written form: 20 marks, awarded independently of the critical responseRespond critically and analytically to features such as the form and the technique of presentation - the specification's own example for a film is camera workEngage critically with intellectually stimulating films in the original language, developing an appreciation of creative uses of the language

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basic level

In the first year watch the film three times: once for the story, once with Hebrew subtitles for the language, and once with a notebook and a pause button for how it is made - and do not attempt the third before the first two, because you cannot notice technique while you are still following the plot.

higher level

In the second year build a bank of six or seven located moments with the technique attached to each, and rehearse describing them accurately in Hebrew from memory, because that is the only evidence you will have in a closed-book paper.

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Contents · 5 sections

הסרט: section 3.4, the film half, and the essay it is examined by

שני הסרטים: the prescribed entries and the route rule#

FoundationAQA 7672 - 3.4.1 Literary texts and filmsAQA 7672 - 4.5 Paper 2: Writing

Section 3.4.1 prints two films. הקיץ של אביה, The Summer of Aviya, directed by Eli Cohen and released in 1988, is an adaptation of an autobiographical book by the actress and writer Gila Almagor, who appears in the film; it is set in Israel in the early years of the state. מישהו לרוץ איתו, Someone to Run With, directed by Oded Davidoff and released in 2006, is an adaptation of the novel of the same name by David Grossman, and is set in Jerusalem. Those are bibliographic facts - director, year, source, setting - and they are the facts a candidate should be able to state accurately. Everything else about each film you should establish from the film itself, watched by you.

The route rule constrains what you can prepare. The specification requires either one text and one film or two texts, so a film is always studied alongside a prescribed text and never alongside the other film. This matters practically: your Paper 2 preparation is always a pair, the two essays are marked by the same two grids, and the time you spend on each should be roughly equal because the marks are. It also matters for note-taking, because a film and a text produce differently shaped notes and you will be keeping both.

Prescribed lists are set by the awarding body and can be revised between issues of a specification, so confirm the list current for your own exam series before committing to a work. For a film there is a second practical question to settle early: which version you are watching, and with what subtitles. A film watched with English subtitles teaches you the story; a film watched with Hebrew subtitles teaches you the language; a film watched with no subtitles at all tests your listening. All three have a place, and the order matters - subtitles off is the last stage, not the first.

One caution about adaptations, which applies to both prescribed films. Each is adapted from a book, and the book is not the film. The examination asks about the film you studied, so evidence must come from what is on the screen: how a moment is shot, what the film shows and what it omits, what the sound is doing. Reading the source book is legitimate and often illuminating - the decision to change, cut or add something is itself analysable - but a candidate who writes about the book and attributes it to the film has produced an inaccuracy in a grid that asks for knowledge that is consistently accurate.

Worked example

Three viewings with three different jobs

You have a prescribed film and a year. Design the viewing programme so that each viewing produces something the others cannot.

Viewing one: the story, whatever it takes
English subtitles if you need them. The only job is to know what happens, in order, so that on later viewings your attention is free. Trying to analyse a film whose plot you are still following is the single commonest reason candidates end up with nothing but plot to write about.
Viewing two: the language, with Hebrew subtitles
Hebrew subtitles turn a film into a listening resource with a transcript attached. Note vocabulary, note register - film dialogue is spoken Hebrew and will be closer to a Paper 3 recording than to any written source you have - and note any line whose meaning depends on how it is said rather than on the words.
Viewing three: the making, with a pause button
Now watch for technique, stopping whenever something is doing work: a shot held longer than expected, a cut that jumps, a scene where the music arrives or stops, a moment shot from an unusual position. Write the timecode and one sentence. This viewing produces the evidence bank, and it is impossible before the first two.
Viewing four, later: no subtitles
Once you know the film, watching without subtitles is genuine Paper 3 practice with a safety net, because you already know what is being said and can attend to how. It is also a good measure of your listening progress across the year: the same film, six months apart, will feel very different.
What each viewing leaves behind
Viewing one leaves a plot spine you will barely use in the essay. Viewing two leaves vocabulary and register notes that serve Paper 3 as well. Viewing three leaves the evidence bank the essay is actually built from. Viewing four leaves a measure of your listening. Only one of the four produces essay evidence, which is why candidates who watch a film twice arrive at the exam with plot.

Result: A four-viewing programme in which only the third produces essay evidence and the third is impossible without the first two - plus two viewings that double as Paper 3 listening practice.

Typical mistakes

Preparing both prescribed films, which is not a permitted combination.
Watching only with English subtitles, so the film never becomes Hebrew practice.
Attributing to the film something that is in the source novel but not on the screen.
Leaving the subtitles-off viewing until the week before the exam, when it should be the last stage of a process that started a year earlier.

Active revision

רשמו בעברית את פרטי הסרט שאתם לומדים: שם הסרט, שם הבמאי, שנת ההפקה, המקור שממנו הוא עובד, והמקום והזמן שבהם הוא מתרחש. אחר כך כתבו שורה אחת על מה שאתם עדיין לא יודעים ותצטרכו לברר מן הצפייה עצמה

Active recall

Recall the key points — then reveal.

Sources: AQA A-level Modern Hebrew (Listening, Reading, Writing) 7672 specification (AQA)

שפת הקולנוע: the vocabulary of technique and the claims it licenses#

StandardAQA 7672 - 4.5 Paper 2: WritingAQA 7672 - 4.7.2 Paper 2 assessment criteria

Technique, and the claim it licenses

Fig. 1A film technique earns marks only when it is attached to a claim. The middle column is what you can observe; the right column is what observing it entitles you to argue. The left column gives the Hebrew term in transliteration - the figure engine has no right-to-left handling, so the Hebrew script for each term is in the prose above.

The specification names camera work as its example of a formal feature in a film, so the vocabulary of technique is not optional decoration - it is the language in which one half of the AO4 mark is earned. In Hebrew: צילום, tsilum, cinematography; תקריב, takriv, a close-up; שוט רחב, shot rachav, a wide shot; זווית צילום, zavit tsilum, camera angle; תנועת מצלמה, tnu'at matslema, camera movement; עריכה, aricha, editing; חיתוך, chituch, a cut; פסקול, paskol, soundtrack; תאורה, te'ura, lighting; קריינות, kraynut, voice-over; סצנה, stsena, a scene; תסריט, tasrit, screenplay; עיבוד, ibud, adaptation; שחקן and שחקנית, sachkan and sachkanit, actor and actress; במאי, bama'i, director.

Naming a technique earns nothing on its own. What earns the mark is the claim the technique licenses, and each technique licenses a different kind of claim. A close-up licenses a claim about where the film wants your attention and about what it is withholding from the frame. A wide shot licenses a claim about a figure's relation to a place. A held shot licenses a claim about duration and discomfort. A cut licenses a claim about what the film chose not to show. Music licenses a claim about how you are being directed to read a scene, and its absence licenses a stronger one. Learning the pairing - technique plus the claim it licenses - is what converts a vocabulary list into analysis.

The productive sentence pattern in Hebrew mirrors the one for literary analysis, with the film as grammatical subject: הסרט מצלם את הרגע ב ... ובכך ... , the film shoots the moment in such-and-such a way, and in doing so ... The verbs are the same analytical set - מציג, presents; מדגיש, emphasises; מסתיר, conceals; מעכב, delays; מעמת, sets against - plus a few specific to film: חותך, cuts; מתמקד ב, focuses on; מתרחק מ, pulls away from. As with the literary essay, making the film the subject of the verb is the grammatical move that turns description into analysis.

The other half of a film's technique is sound, and it is the half candidates most often ignore because it is harder to notice. Dialogue is only part of it: there is the score, diegetic music that the characters can hear, ambient sound, and silence. A scene in which the music stops is doing something as deliberate as a close-up. There is also language itself as a formal feature: which characters speak which register, whether any character speaks another language, and what happens at the moments when someone cannot say something. That last is a genuinely rich source of analysis and it is available in any film.

Worked example

From a noticed shot to an AO4 sentence

Watching viewing three, you notice that a conversation is shot with one speaker's back to the camera throughout. Build it up into essay material.

Record the observation precisely
Timecode, who is in the shot, what the framing is, how long it lasts. Precision matters because you will be writing from memory in the exam and a vague memory becomes an inaccuracy. One line in the notebook: a conversation, one speaker filmed from behind throughout, no reverse shot.
Name the technique in Hebrew
הסרט מצלם את השיחה מגבו של אחד הדוברים ואינו חותך לצד השני. The film shoots the conversation from behind one of the speakers and does not cut to the other side. Note מגבו, from his back, a noun with a possessive suffix, and אינו חותך, does not cut, the negated participle with אין plus a suffix.
State what the technique withholds
כך נמנעת מן הצופה גישה לפניו של אותו דובר. In this way the viewer is denied access to that speaker's face. נמנעת is nif'al and the construction is impersonal, which is exactly right: the film does it, and the sentence describes the effect without ascribing an intention you cannot evidence.
Make the claim, marked appropriately
אפשר לטעון שבכך הסרט מציב את הצופה בעמדת מי שאינו יודע, בדיוק כמו הדמות שכן נראית. It can be argued that in doing so the film places the viewer in the position of one who does not know, exactly like the character who is visible. אפשר לטעון marks the claim as a reading rather than a fact, and the comparison does the analytical work.
Attach it to the essay's argument
The sentence is only useful if it supports the claim the question asked you to make. If your essay's claim is about knowledge and concealment, this evidence is central. If it is about something else, this observation is a good one you will not use - and knowing which of your bank of observations serves the question in front of you is what the eight-minute plan is for.

Result: One observed shot turned into four sentences - a precise description, a Hebrew statement of the technique with a possessive suffix and a negated participle, an impersonal statement of the effect, and a marked claim - plus the discipline of asking whether it serves the question actually set.

Typical mistakes

Listing techniques without attaching a claim to any of them.
Writing about acting and dialogue only, so that nothing about the camera or the sound appears.
Describing a shot inaccurately, which in a closed-book essay is an error rather than an omission.
Using English film vocabulary in a Hebrew essay when Hebrew has the terms.

Active revision

בחרו סצנה אחת מן הסרט וכתבו עליה שש שורות בעברית: שתיים על מה שהמצלמה עושה, שתיים על מה שהפסקול עושה, ושתיים על הטענה שכל אחד מהם מאפשר לכם לטעון. אל תכתבו אף שורה על מה שקורה בעלילה

Active recall

Recall the key points — then reveal.

Sources: AQA A-level Modern Hebrew (Listening, Reading, Writing) 7672 specification (AQA)

מלכודת הסיפור: the plot-narration trap#

AdvancedAQA 7672 - 4.5 Paper 2: WritingAQA 7672 - 4.7.2 Paper 2 assessment criteria

The most common failure in a film essay is that it retells the film, and the reason is structural rather than lazy: a film is stored in memory as a sequence of events, so when a candidate opens the tap that is what comes out. A novel resists this slightly better because its language is on the page and pulls you towards how it is written. A film has to be actively converted into analysable material, which is what viewing three is for, and a candidate who has not done that conversion has only the plot to write with.

The diagnostic is simple and worth running on every practice essay: underline every sentence that reports what happens. If more than about a quarter of the essay is underlined, it is narration. The AO4 grid asks for conclusions supported by evidence, and a sequence of events is not a conclusion; it is what the examiner is assumed to know already, since they set the question about a film on their own prescribed list. Nothing in a plot summary can distinguish a candidate who has thought about the film from one who has watched it once.

The replacement is the same claim-evidence-inference rhythm as in the literary essay, with the film's technique doing the work of the text's language. Claim: the film presents X as Y. Evidence: compressed to one sentence, and specifically about how the moment is presented rather than what occurs in it. Inference: what the presentation makes available to a viewer. Formal note: named technique. Four sentences to a paragraph, of which at most one reports an event, and that one reports only the part that carries the claim.

There is one legitimate use of plot, and it is worth knowing so you do not over-correct. Structure is analysable: where the film places its turn, what it withholds until late, whether it uses flashback or a frame, how it ends relative to how it begins. Those are statements about the arrangement of events rather than about the events, and they belong in a film essay - often as the most valuable single observation in it. The test is whether your sentence could be replaced by a summary; if it could, it is narration, and if it could not, it is structure.

Worked example

Cutting a narrating paragraph down to an arguing one

You have written a seventy-word paragraph that tells an episode and ends with one sentence of point. Rebuild it at the same length.

Identify the load-bearing element
Read the seventy words and ask which single detail the final sentence actually depends on. Usually it is one thing - a gesture, an omission, a shot. Everything else in the paragraph is scaffolding that the examiner does not need, because they know the film.
Open with the claim instead of the event
Move your last sentence to the front and sharpen it. Where the paragraph ended with and this shows that the film is interested in X, it now opens with הסרט מציג את X כ ... The paragraph now has a direction from its first word, which is what makes the reader read the evidence as evidence.
Compress the episode to one sentence containing only the load-bearing element
One sentence, and specifically about presentation: not what the character did, but how the film showed it. If you find you cannot say how it was shown, that is information - it means this episode is in your bank as plot rather than as evidence, and it should be replaced by one that is not.
Spend the recovered words on inference and technique
You have freed perhaps forty words. Spend them on two sentences: what the presentation makes available to a viewer, and the named technique with a reason. Those forty words are worth several times what the narration was worth, because they are the only part of the paragraph the AO4 grid is actually reading.
Run the test again
Underline what reports events. It should now be one clause. If it is still two sentences, the compression did not happen and you have rewritten rather than rebuilt - which is the usual outcome of a first attempt, and the reason to practise this on paragraphs rather than on whole essays.

Result: A rebuilt seventy-word paragraph in which the claim opens, the episode occupies one presentation-focused sentence, and forty recovered words carry an inference and a named technique with its reason - with a repeatable test for whether the rebuild actually happened.

Typical mistakes

Writing an introduction that summarises the film before the argument starts, which spends fifty of your three hundred words on nothing.
Telling an episode in full when only one element of it supports the claim.
Over-correcting into an essay of pure technique with no reference to what any of it is about.
Confusing structure with plot and therefore cutting the structural observations along with the narration.

Active revision

קחו חיבור שכתבתם על הסרט, וסמנו בקו כל משפט שמספר מה קרה. ספרו כמה מילים סומנו מתוך שלוש מאות. אם יותר משבעים וחמש, כתבו את החיבור מחדש כך שכל אפיזודה תופיע במשפט אחד בלבד, ובדקו מה נכנס במקום

Active recall

Recall the key points — then reveal.

Sources: AQA A-level Modern Hebrew (Listening, Reading, Writing) 7672 specification (AQA)

ההקשרים של הסרט: issues, themes and contexts#

AdvancedAQA 7672 - 4.7.2 Paper 2 assessment criteriaAQA 7672 - 3.4.1 Literary texts and films

The AO4 descriptor asks for evaluation of the issues, themes and the cultural and social contexts of the work studied, and for a film the context has an extra dimension a text does not: a film is made at a particular moment by a particular industry, and its conditions of production are part of its context. When it was released, what Israeli cinema was doing at the time, whether it was adapted from a book and what the adaptation changed - all of these are legitimate context, and all are more concrete than a general statement about the period.

Israeli cinema has a documented history that gives you real material. It has been a state-supported industry for much of its existence, with public funding bodies whose criteria have shaped what gets made; it has moved through recognisable phases that critics have named and argued about; and it has periodically had international success at festivals, which changes what gets financed. A candidate can name the decade a film belongs to, say what Israeli cinema was doing in it, and attribute that characterisation to the critics who make it, which is both more accurate and better rewarded than a claim about the film reflecting its society.

Reflecting its society is in fact the phrase to avoid, and it is worth understanding why. A film is not a mirror: it is a made object with a director, a screenwriter, funders and an intended audience, and what it shows is a set of choices. So the analytical form is not the film reflects X but the film chooses to show X and not Y, and here is where you can see the choice. That reformulation is available in every essay on every film, it costs nothing, and it converts an unsupportable claim into an evidenced one.

Where a prescribed film touches material that is genuinely contested - and on this specification's list, both do touch history that is remembered differently by different people - the same rules apply as everywhere else in this subject. State what the film shows; attribute every characterisation of what it means to whoever offers it, including yourself where the reading is yours; note where a reading is disputed; and do not use the film as evidence for a historical claim. A film is evidence of what a film chose to show, which is a real and interesting thing, and it is not evidence of what happened.

Worked example

Rewriting reflects as chooses, four times

Four sentences in your draft use the word reflects. Rebuild each so that it is evidenced.

The unevidenced original
הסרט משקף את החברה הישראלית של אותה תקופה. The film reflects the Israeli society of that period. Unfalsifiable, unsupported, and true of literally any film ever made about any society. It is also the sentence most likely to be in the opening paragraph, where it does the most damage.
The first rebuild: choice
הסרט בוחר להתמקד במשפחה אחת ולא במוסדות. The film chooses to focus on one family and not on institutions. Now there is a claim about a decision, and it can be supported by pointing at the film. The word בוחר, chooses, is doing all the work.
The second rebuild: omission
הסרט אינו מראה כמעט דבר מחוץ למרחב שבו חיות הדמויות. The film shows almost nothing outside the space in which the characters live. An omission is often stronger evidence than a presence, because it is a choice that had to be made repeatedly.
The third rebuild: attribution
מבקרים ראו בבחירה הזאת אמירה על מה שאפשר היה לדבר עליו באותן שנים. Critics saw in that choice a statement about what could be spoken of in those years. The interpretation is attributed, so you are reporting a reading rather than asserting a fact about a period.
The fourth rebuild: your own reading, marked
לדעתי דווקא ההיצמדות למרחב הפרטי היא שמאפשרת לסרט לומר משהו כללי, משום שהיא מונעת ממנו להסביר. In my view it is precisely the adherence to the private space that allows the film to say something general, because it prevents it from explaining. Marked as yours, given a reason, and using the דווקא ... היא ש cleft - the construction the top AO3 band describes.

Result: One unevidenced sentence replaced by four - a choice, an omission, an attributed critical reading and a marked personal reading with a cleft construction - none of which uses the word reflects and all of which can be supported from the film.

Typical mistakes

Writing that a film reflects its society, which cannot be evidenced from the film.
Using a film as evidence for a historical claim in a research-project answer or a thematic essay.
Treating the source novel's context as the film's, when they may be decades apart.
Writing a paragraph of period history with the film mentioned at the end.

Active revision

כתבו על הסרט שלכם שלוש פסקאות בעברית: הראשונה על תנאי ההפקה - שנה, מקור, תעשייה; השנייה על מה שהסרט בוחר להראות ומה הוא בוחר שלא להראות; והשלישית על פרשנות אחת שמיוחסת למבקר ופרשנות אחת משלכם, מסומנת ככזאת

Active recall

Recall the key points — then reveal.

Sources: AQA A-level Modern Hebrew (Listening, Reading, Writing) 7672 specification (AQA)

החיבור על הסרט: the second of your two essays#

AdvancedAQA 7672 - 4.5 Paper 2: WritingAQA 7672 - 4.7.2 Paper 2: Writing AO3 and AO4

The film essay has the same shape and the same two grids as the text essay, so everything in the sibling topic about architecture and timing applies here unchanged: a one-sentence claim that answers the question and doubles as the conclusion, two evidence paragraphs, a genuine qualification, and six placed grammatical structures. What differs is the material - technique rather than language - and one practical point about order. Do the essay you are more confident about first, because banking one good essay changes how you approach the second; but plan both before writing either, because the second plan made at the ninety-minute mark is measurably worse than the second plan made at the ten-minute mark.

One trap is specific to the pairing. Because your two works are studied together and marked by the same grids, it is tempting to import an argument from one to the other. Do not - each question asks about its own work, and an essay that spends its words comparing earns nothing for the comparison, because the question did not ask for one. Where a genuine parallel exists it can appear in a clause, not a paragraph. The exception is that method transfers freely: the claim-evidence-inference rhythm, the qualification, the six structures and the checking routine are the same for both.

For the AO3 grid, the film essay has a particular advantage worth exploiting. Film technique vocabulary is largely composed of construct chains - זווית צילום, תנועת מצלמה, נקודת מבט - so a paragraph about technique naturally contains two or three of the most characteristically Hebrew structures in the language without your having to contrive them. Use them precisely, get the article on the second noun, and the range descriptor takes care of itself in the paragraphs where you are analysing.

The checking routine is unchanged and should be run on both essays with whatever time remains: agreement, definiteness including inside every chain, et before every definite direct object, the five final letter forms, the binyan of every verb against the sense, and the tense - present for what the film does, past for what happened before or around it. Five minutes across two essays is the minimum; ten is better, and can be found by not writing a summary introduction to either.

Worked example

Two hours, two essays, one clock plan

Build and stress-test the Paper 2 clock plan.

Fix the checkpoints, not the durations
Both plans complete by 0:16. First essay written by 0:55. Second essay written by 1:50. Checking to 2:00. Four checkpoints written at the top of the answer booklet, and you are now managing against times rather than against a feeling about how long things are taking.
Plan both first, in eight minutes each
Read both chosen questions, then plan both. This costs nothing extra and gains a great deal: the second plan is made while you are fresh and while the first essay's argument is not yet crowding your memory, and it means that when you finish the first essay you start writing immediately instead of stopping to think.
Write the stronger essay first
Confidence is a real resource in a timed paper. Banking a good essay by the fifty-five-minute mark changes how you write the second one; struggling with the harder essay first and arriving at the easier one with forty minutes left does the opposite. The marks are identical, so the order is yours to choose - choose it deliberately.
Decide the sacrifice in advance
If at 0:55 the first essay is not finished, finish the sentence, leave it, and start the second. An unfinished first essay costs a few marks; an unwritten second essay costs forty. That decision is trivially easy now and very hard in the room, which is exactly why it must be made now.
Protect the checking window
The last ten minutes are worth more than the ten minutes before them, because the six-point check reliably finds errors and a hurried extra paragraph reliably does not. Do not spend the checking window writing. If you finish early, run the check twice - once for agreement and definiteness, once for et, final letters, binyan and tense.

Result: Four clock checkpoints, both essays planned in the first sixteen minutes, the stronger essay written first as a deliberate choice, a pre-made decision about what to abandon at fifty-five minutes, and a protected ten-minute checking window used for two passes of the six-point check.

Typical mistakes

Comparing the two works at length when neither question asked for a comparison.
Writing a plot-summary introduction to the film essay, which costs a sixth of the word count.
Running out of time on the second essay because the first was over-written.
Using the past tense for what the film does, which reads as narration even where the content is analytical.

Active revision

תרגלו פרק שני שלם בזמן: שעתיים, שני חיבורים, תכנון שניהם לפני הכתיבה. רשמו את השעה שבה סיימתם כל שלב, והשוו לתוכנית. חזרו על התרגיל שלוש פעמים לפני הבחינה, כי חלוקת הזמן בין שני חיבורים היא מיומנות נפרדת מכתיבת חיבור אחד

Active recall

Recall the key points — then reveal.

Sources: AQA A-level Modern Hebrew (Listening, Reading, Writing) 7672 specification (AQA)

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AQA

AQA A-level Modern Hebrew (Listening, Reading, Writing) 7672 specification

הסרט: section 3.4, the film half, and the essay it is examined by

5 sections~28 min reading time4 competenciesLevel Foundation 1 · Standard 1 · Advanced 3

הסרט: section 3.4, the film half, and the essay it is examined by

Key points

Three viewings with three different jobs

Key points

From a noticed shot to an AO4 sentence

Key points

Cutting a narrating paragraph down to an arguing one

Key points

Rewriting reflects as chooses, four times

Key points

Two hours, two essays, one clock plan

Sources

הסרט: section 3.4, the film half, and the essay it is examined by

Key points

Three viewings with three different jobs

Key points

From a noticed shot to an AO4 sentence

Key points

Cutting a narrating paragraph down to an arguing one

Key points

Rewriting reflects as chooses, four times

Key points

Two hours, two essays, one clock plan

Sources