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The independent research and Paper 1 Section C — the largest single task in the qualification

This topic carries the independent research and the question that assesses it. The first thing to say is what it is NOT: in this qualification the research is not a speaking task, because there is no speaking paper. It is examined inside Paper 1 as Section C, a written question worth 40 marks — half of Paper 1 and 20 per cent of the whole A-Level, and by a distance the largest single task in the qualification. The student selects ONE of the four prescribed research subjects, covers ALL THREE of its aspects, gathers evidence independently from at least two authentic Japanese sources, and then sits the examination with no dictionary and no research documentation. On the day, they read an unseen Japanese text on their subject and respond in Japanese, in approximately 600 to 700 characters, to a statement about it, using both the text and their own research findings. Three levels-based grids are applied to that one answer: AO4 out of 20, AO2 out of 10 and AO3 out of 10.

5 sections·~35 min reading time·3 competencies·Level Standard 2 · Advanced 3

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Exam profile
AO2 · Understand and respond in writing to an unseen written Japanese text and use it in an argumentAO3 · Manipulate Japanese accurately and with range in extended argumentative writingAO4 · Show knowledge and understanding of, and respond critically and analytically to, a researched aspect of Japanese society and culture
Operators:論じなさい評価しなさい分析しなさい説明しなさい述べなさい答えなさい

basic level

At first-year standard the target is choosing a subject early, reading Japanese sources on all three of its aspects, and building notes that can be memorised. The single most useful habit is writing short Japanese paragraphs about the research as you go, rather than collecting material in English and translating it at the end.

higher level

The full A-Level expects an argued response to a statement, using research findings and an unseen text together, with a sustained line of argument and conclusions drawn. That means having positions rather than facts, knowing what would count as evidence against you, and being able to write 600 to 700 characters of argued Japanese in eighty-five minutes with nothing on the desk.

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Contents · 5 sections▾
  1. The independent research and Paper 1 Section C — the largest single task in the qualification
    • 01What the independent research is, and where it is examined◐
    • 02The rules of the independent research, and what teachers may do◐
    • 03Research notes built to be memorised, because nothing may be taken in●
    • 04The three grids, and what each one is actually looking at●
    • 05The eighty-five minutes, end to end●
§ 01

What the independent research is, and where it is examined#

●●○StandardLPPearson Edexcel 9JA0 Paper 1 Section C — writing (research question), 40 marksLPPearson Edexcel 9JA0 — guidance on the independent researchLPDfE GCE AS and A level subject content for modern foreign languages

The four research subjects and their aspects

The four research subjectsTable with 3 columns and 4 rows, Data: THEME (JA) · RESEARCH SUBJECT (JA) · The three aspects you must cover; テーマ1 · 家族関係や人間関係 · Traditional structure; the nuclear family; relationships in the home; テーマ2 · 変わっていく行事 · Traditional and modern events; tourism; Western occasions; テーマ3 · 高齢化社会 · Isolation; support from families; social support; テーマ4 · 省エネ生活 · Saving in daily life; the supply argument; older wisdom, highlighted cell: Saving in daily life; the supply argument; older wisdomTHEME (JA)RESEARCH SUBJECT (JA)THE THREE ASPECTS YOUMUST COVERテーマ1家族関係や人間関係Traditional structure; thenuclear family;relationships in the homeテーマ2変わっていく行事Traditional and modernevents; tourism; Westernoccasionsテーマ3高齢化社会Isolation; support fromfamilies; social supportテーマ4省エネ生活Saving in daily life; thesupply argument; olderwisdom
Fig. 1The four 自由研究の課題, one per theme, with the three aspects each. You choose exactly one subject and must cover all three of its aspects — a rule that catches candidates who have read widely on two aspects and not at all on the third. Theme 4's subject is printed here in short form; the specification's full title is 福島原発事故後の省エネ生活. The emphasised cell is Theme 4's aspect list, because it is the subject whose middle aspect, the argument over energy supply, is a genuinely unresolved public disagreement and therefore both the most rewarding and the most demanding of the four to handle fairly.

Key points

Begin with the correction, because candidates and teachers arriving from other modern-language A-Levels routinely make the same mistake. In this qualification the independent research is NOT presented or defended orally, because Pearson Edexcel Level 3 Advanced GCE in Japanese (listening, reading and writing) has no speaking paper at all. The research is examined in writing, inside Paper 1, as Section C. That section is worth 40 marks with a recommended 1 hour 25 minutes — half of Paper 1's 80 marks, and since Paper 1 is 40 per cent of the qualification, 20 per cent of the whole A-Level from one question. Nothing else in the qualification comes close: the two translations are 20 marks each, and each Paper 2 essay is 45 marks but is one of two.
The task on the day has a precise shape. You are given one unseen Japanese text on your chosen research subject, and a statement about that subject to respond to. You must use information from the text TOGETHER WITH your own research findings, critically analyse the statement, and present ideas, arguments and conclusions supported by relevant information, examples and references from both. You write approximately 600 to 700 characters in Japanese. You have no dictionary and no documentation relating to your research. Three grids are applied to the single answer: knowledge and understanding of society and culture via research (AO4) out of 20, understand and respond to written language (AO2) out of 10, and accuracy and range of language (AO3) out of 10.
The AO4 and AO2 grids are printed side by side in the specification, and it says why: because of the connection between the information the student produces from their knowledge and understanding, and the information they take from the unseen text to contribute to it. The specification also notes explicitly that there are twice as many marks for AO4 as for AO2. Both facts are practically useful. The first means the text is not a comprehension exercise appended to an essay — it has to be woven in. The second means that if you have to choose where to spend characters, research substance outweighs textual detail two to one.
One drafting inconsistency in the published document is worth knowing rather than being confused by on the day. The Paper 1 assessment information gives the Section C length as approximately 600 to 700 characters. The generic marking-guidance page for Section C, which is boilerplate shared across the qualification family, carries a line about a recommended word count of 300 to 350 words. The paper-specific instruction in characters is the operative one, it is consistent with Paper 2's 600 to 700 characters per essay and Paper 3's 400 to 500 for question 5(c), and in any case the specification states that the whole essay is marked regardless of length.
Worked example

Choosing a research subject against criteria rather than by preference

You must choose one of the four subjects, as early in the year as possible. Work through the choice properly rather than picking the one that sounds most interesting.

  1. 01Criterion one: can you find Japanese sources on all THREE aspects?

    The requirement is to cover all three aspects and to gather evidence from at least two authentic sources in Japanese. So the first test is availability, aspect by aspect, and it must be run before you commit. 高齢化社会's three aspects — isolation, family support, social support — are all extremely well covered in Japanese local-government and newspaper material. 変わっていく行事's tourism aspect is well covered; its Western-occasions aspect requires more searching. Run the search first and choose second.

  2. 02Criterion two: does the subject give you something to ARGUE?

    The AO4 grid out of 20 rewards critical analysis, a sustained line of argument and conclusions drawn, not a description however thorough. So ask, for each subject, what the disagreement is. 省エネ生活 has one built in — the energy-supply argument is unresolved and both sides are serious. 家族関係 has one in 選択的夫婦別姓 and in the balance of care work. 高齢化社会 has one in the family-versus-society trade-off. 変わっていく行事 has one in tourism and authenticity. All four work; make sure you can state yours in a sentence.

  3. 03Criterion three: is it clear of your Paper 2 works?

    The specification states that the independent research must not relate to, or make reference to, one of the literary works or films studied for Paper 2, and that teachers must ensure students do not intend to use them. This is a rule about the RESEARCH, not only about the essay, so a subject that would naturally draw on your set film is ruled out at the choosing stage. Check it now, in writing, with your teacher, rather than discovering it in the examination hall.

  4. 04Criterion four: can you write about it without inventing numbers?

    Every one of the four subjects invites statistics — household composition, visitor numbers, the proportion of older people, energy consumption — and you will have no documentation in the examination. So the practical question is whether you can make your argument with comparative and structural language: 増加傾向にある, 以前に比べて, 制度の名前そのものが. If a subject's whole interest to you is a set of figures you would have to reproduce from memory, choose another one or find a different angle on it.

  5. 05Criterion five: does the centre's pattern of choices leave you independent?

    The specification says teachers must monitor the different research subjects being undertaken in a centre to ensure independence is maintained, and that if more than one student chooses the same subject the teacher must ensure each is working independently. That is not a prohibition on sharing a subject, but it is a reason to talk to your teacher early: choosing a subject nobody else in your group has taken removes a whole class of complication and usually gives you more distinctive material.

  6. 06Then commit, in writing, and start reading in Japanese

    The specification recommends deciding as early as possible in the academic year, and the reason is not administrative: research in a foreign language is slow at first and fast later, and the compounding only starts once you begin. Write down your chosen subject, its three aspects, and one Japanese search term for each aspect. That single page, produced in the first weeks, is worth more than any amount of deliberation about which subject would have been best.

Result: The five criteria: sources available in Japanese for all three aspects; a statable disagreement to argue about; no overlap with either Paper 2 work; an argument that survives without invented statistics; and a subject that leaves your independence unambiguous within your centre. Run all five, commit in writing, and start reading Japanese in the first weeks of the course.

Exam focus

  • This is not a speaking task. It is Paper 1 Section C, written, 40 marks, 20 per cent of the A-Level (AO4).
  • Use the unseen text and your research findings TOGETHER; the two grids are interlocked (AO2, AO4).
  • Twice as many marks for AO4 as for AO2: research substance outweighs textual detail two to one (AO4).
  • Write approximately 600 to 700 characters in about 85 minutes, with nothing on the desk (AO3).

Typical mistakes

  • Preparing to talk about the research. There is no speaking paper in this qualification.
  • Treating the unseen text as a comprehension exercise separate from the essay.
  • Underestimating the section. It is worth more than either Paper 2 essay and twice either translation.
  • Planning around 300 words. The paper-specific instruction is 600 to 700 characters.

Active revision

自分の自由研究の課題を一つ選び、その三つの側面をすべて日本語で書き出しなさい。次に、各側面について、(一)確かな事実、(二)解釈、(三)その解釈の出どころ、を一つずつ書きなさい。最後に、この課題について自分がどのような立場を取れるかを、一文で書きなさい

Active recall

Recall the key points — then reveal.

Sources: Pearson Edexcel Level 3 Advanced GCE in Japanese (9JA0) specification (Pearson Edexcel)

§ 02

The rules of the independent research, and what teachers may do#

●●○StandardLPPearson Edexcel 9JA0 — guidance on the independent research: definition, requirements, teacher roleLPPearson Edexcel 9JA0 — the independent research must not relate to the works studied for Paper 2LPDfE GCE AS and A level subject content for modern foreign languages

Key points

The specification defines independent research, for assessment purposes, as research carried out without the help or instruction of others, INCLUDING TEACHERS. That is a strong definition and it is worth reading literally, because it determines what help you may accept. The research must relate to the Japanese cultural or social context; it must be based on all aspects of one of the prescribed research subjects; it must allow you to gather evidence independently from at least two authentic sources in the assessed language; and it must enable you to contextualise and evaluate your findings independently. Authentic sources may include newspaper and magazine articles, online written sources, journals, literary texts, films, television, radio, online audio-visual material and interviews.
What teachers CAN do is bounded and useful: give guidance on developing research skills, including methodology and analytical tools; give guidance on the content of the research subjects as outlined in the specification; comment on the availability of resources and on time constraints; and advise and direct students to the assessment objectives. What teachers MUST do: explain what independence means; confirm that your research meets all the aspects of the subject and has the potential to meet the assessment criteria; ensure you do not intend to use a Paper 2 work; and monitor the spread of subjects in the centre. What teachers MUST NOT do is stated in one line and is unambiguous: teach the content of the research subjects to students, or provide sources.
That last prohibition has a practical implication students often miss. A teacher may not hand you an article. So the search itself is part of the task, and it is worth developing deliberately: a Japanese search term is not a translation of an English one, and searching 高齢者 孤立 地域 will return material that searching elderly isolation Japan will not. Build a short list of Japanese search terms per aspect early — the vocabulary sections of the six thematic topics in these notes are a good source of them — and search in Japanese from the beginning. Local-government sites, newspaper features and broadcaster explainers are all authentic and all readable at this level.
The consequences of getting the rules wrong are real. The specification notes that if malpractice is found to have taken place, a penalty may be applied depending on the circumstances and severity, and refers to the JCQ guidance on suspected malpractice. None of that should worry a student who researches their own subject from their own sources; it is stated here because the rules are easy to breach accidentally — by building a subject around a set film, by using a class handout as a source, by working so closely with a friend on the same subject that neither is independent. Each of those is avoidable by a decision taken early, and each is very hard to undo late.
Worked example

Checking a research plan against the specification's own rules

A student has chosen 変わっていく行事, has read three English-language articles about Japanese festivals, has been given a Japanese newspaper article by their teacher, and intends to write about the festival that features in the film they are studying for Paper 2. Audit the plan.

  1. 01Breach one: the sources are not in the assessed language

    The specification requires evidence gathered independently from at least two authentic sources IN THE ASSESSED LANGUAGE. Three English-language articles satisfy none of that requirement, however good they are. They are not worthless — background reading in English can orient you — but they cannot count towards the two, and more importantly they will not give you the Japanese vocabulary you need to write 600 to 700 characters. The repair: find at least two Japanese sources per aspect, and read them.

  2. 02Breach two: the teacher provided a source

    Teachers must not provide sources. An article handed over by a teacher cannot form part of your independent research, and using it as one of your two would misrepresent the work as independent when it was not. The repair is straightforward and is also better research: use the handed article to learn its vocabulary and its search terms, then find your own material on the same aspect. The teacher may legitimately comment on the AVAILABILITY of resources, which is a different thing from supplying one.

  3. 03Breach three: overlap with a Paper 2 work

    The independent research must not relate to, or make reference to, one of the literary works or films studied for Paper 2, and the specification puts an explicit duty on teachers to ensure students do not intend to use them. Building the research around a festival that features in the set film relates the research to that film, and quoting the film as evidence in Section C would compound it. The repair: choose a different festival, or a different aspect of the subject, with no connection to either Paper 2 work.

  4. 04The gap that is not a breach but will cost marks: coverage

    変わっていく行事 has three aspects — traditional festivals and modern events, the effect of events and festivals on tourism, and the arrival of Western occasions. A plan built entirely around one festival covers the first aspect and may touch the second. The third is untouched. The specification requires all three, and a Section C answer that can only address one is capped by the AO4 grid regardless of how good that one is. Plan by aspect, not by topic.

  5. 05The rebuilt plan, aspect by aspect

    Aspect one: two Japanese sources on a specific local festival and on a modern urban event, giving a contrast to argue from. Aspect two: two Japanese sources on tourism at a named place, ideally one from a local-government site and one from a news feature so the perspectives differ. Aspect three: two Japanese sources on an imported occasion — the Japanese development of ホワイトデー or the growth of ハロウィン as a street event. Six sources, all Japanese, all found by the student, none connected to a Paper 2 work.

  6. 06And the record to keep

    For each source: what it is, who published it, when, and one sentence in Japanese on what you take from it. You will not take that record into the examination — no research documentation is permitted — but building it forces you to read each source for a claim rather than for atmosphere, and the one-sentence summaries are the raw material of the memorised notes the next section builds. A record kept in Japanese also means you never have to translate your own research under time pressure.

Result: Three breaches — sources not in Japanese, a source provided by the teacher, and an overlap with a Paper 2 work — plus a coverage gap on the third aspect. The rebuilt plan: six sources, two per aspect, all authentic Japanese, all found independently, none connected to either Paper 2 work, each recorded with its publisher and date and one Japanese sentence saying what it contributes.

Exam focus

  • At least two authentic sources IN JAPANESE, covering all three aspects (AO4).
  • Teachers may not teach the subjects' content or provide sources. The search is part of the task (AO4).
  • Search in Japanese with Japanese terms; English searches return a different corpus (AO4).
  • Never build the research on a Paper 2 work — the rule applies to the research, not only to the essay (AO4).

Typical mistakes

  • Using a teacher-provided article as a source. Teachers must not provide sources.
  • Researching in English and translating. The requirement is authentic sources in the assessed language.
  • Covering two aspects thoroughly and the third not at all. All three are required.
  • Working so closely with a classmate on the same subject that neither student's work is independent.

Active revision

自分の課題の三つの側面それぞれについて、日本語の検索語を三つずつ考えなさい。英語からの直訳ではなく、日本語の資料で実際に使われている語を選ぶこと。次に、各側面について日本語の資料を二つ以上見つけ、出典・発行者・日付を記録しなさい。教師から資料を受け取ってはならない

Active recall

Recall the key points — then reveal.

Sources: Pearson Edexcel Level 3 Advanced GCE in Japanese (9JA0) specification (Pearson Edexcel)

§ 03

Research notes built to be memorised, because nothing may be taken in#

●●●AdvancedLPPearson Edexcel 9JA0 Paper 1 — students are not permitted access to a dictionary or any documentation related to their researchLPPearson Edexcel 9JA0 Paper 1 Section C — use research findings and information from the unseen textLPDfE GCE AS and A level subject content for modern foreign languages

Key points

The rule that shapes everything is short: students are not permitted access to a dictionary during the examination, or any documentation related to their research. So the notes are not a document you will consult; they are a structure you will carry. That changes what a good note is. A note that summarises an article is useless, because you will not have it. A note you have memorised, that contains one anchor fact, one attributable interpretation and one ready-made Japanese sentence, is worth more than twenty pages of reading you cannot reproduce. Build for recall from the first week, and test recall regularly, because the difference between having read something and being able to write it is very large.
The structure that works is one card per aspect, three items per card, plus one cross-aspect sentence. Per aspect: an ANCHOR — a dated, documented, checkable fact, such as an institution's founding year, a law's enactment, an official category's existence; an INTERPRETATION — a reading of that fact, attributed to those who hold it rather than asserted; and a SENTENCE — one line of Japanese, memorised verbatim, that you can put on the page under pressure. Three aspects gives nine items and three sentences. Then one cross-aspect sentence that connects two of the aspects, which is where the top AO4 band's phrase about arguments that link together is earned.
The memorised sentences do real work beyond their content, and it is worth understanding why. Under examination pressure the first two minutes of writing are the hardest, and a sentence you can produce without composing it gets you started, sets your register, and demonstrates control immediately. Choose them accordingly: each should be grammatically varied — one with a nominalisation, one with a concessive, one with an attribution — so that between them they also feed the AO3 range grid. And each should be a claim rather than a definition, because a definition cannot be argued from and a claim can.
Two things belong on the cards that candidates rarely include. First, the counter-evidence: for each aspect, the one fact or reading that runs against your usual line. You will need it for the concession that every strong answer contains, and inventing an objection under pressure is far harder than remembering one. Second, the vocabulary: eight to ten terms per aspect that you can WRITE, not merely recognise, since the AO3 grids reward a wide variety of kanji and since a technical term you can only recognise is not available to you on the day. Nine items, three sentences, three counter-facts, thirty words. That is the whole examination resource, and it is memorable.
Worked example

One card, built and then tested

Your subject is 高齢化社会 and you are building the card for its third aspect, 社会的支援. Build the five items, then show how you test it.

  1. 01Item one, the anchor: dated, documented, checkable

    介護保険制度 came into effect in April 2000, providing assessed care services funded by contributions and taxation. A date, an institution, and a mechanism. That is worth more in an examination than three impressions, because the AO4 grid rewards references from research findings and a dated institution is unmistakably one. Note that the anchor contains no statistic, which is deliberate: statistics are exactly what you cannot verify on the day.

  2. 02Item two, the interpretation, attributed

    That the system's sustainability depends on a care workforce which a shrinking working-age population must supply — a concern raised in Japanese policy discussion. Written on the card as an attributed reading, not as a fact. Attributing on the CARD matters, because whatever is on the card is what you will write, and a card that says the system is unsustainable will produce an essay that asserts it.

  3. 03Item three, the memorised sentence

    二〇〇〇年に介護保険制度が始まり、介護は家族だけの問題ではなくなった。 One sentence, memorised verbatim. It contains a date, an institution, a ます-stem chain (始まり) and a negative change-of-state (ではなくなった), so it feeds the range grid as well as the knowledge grid. And it is a claim — that care ceased to be only a family matter — rather than a definition, so a paragraph can be built from it.

  4. 04Item four, the counter-evidence

    介護離職 — leaving employment to care for a relative — is a recognised policy concern with its own name, which indicates that a great deal of care continues to be provided by families despite the system. That fact runs against a simple reading of your memorised sentence, and having it on the card means your concession paragraph writes itself: 一方で、介護離職という言葉があること自体が、家族の負担が残っていることを示している。

  5. 05Item five, the writable vocabulary

    介護, 保険, 制度, 支援, 負担, 施設, 相談, 地域, 高齢者, 家族. Ten terms, all within the kanji you should be able to produce, all specific to this aspect. Write each by hand until the stroke order is automatic. Anything you cannot write goes to kana or is replaced: ケアマネージャー in katakana is a perfectly good alternative to a kanji compound you would risk.

  6. 06The test, and what to do with the result

    A week later, with the card face down: write the anchor, the interpretation with its attribution, the sentence verbatim, the counter-fact, and the ten words. Anything you cannot reproduce is not yet a resource. Shorten it, make it more concrete, or drop it — a card of five items you own is worth more than a card of twelve you half-remember. Repeat the test at increasing intervals; three cycles will make the card permanent, which is the point of building it this way rather than as notes.

Result: The card: anchor — 介護保険制度 in force from April 2000, contribution-and-tax funded, assessed services. Interpretation — sustainability depends on a workforce a shrinking population must supply, a concern raised in Japanese policy discussion. Sentence — 二〇〇〇年に介護保険制度が始まり、介護は家族だけの問題ではなくなった。 Counter-evidence — 介護離職 has its own name, which indicates family provision continues. Vocabulary — 介護, 保険, 制度, 支援, 負担, 施設, 相談, 地域, 高齢者, 家族. Tested face-down a week later, and revised until every item is reproducible.

Exam focus

  • Nothing may be taken in. Build notes for recall, not for reference (AO4).
  • One card per aspect: anchor fact, attributed interpretation, memorised Japanese sentence (AO4).
  • Add one cross-aspect sentence — links between aspects are where the top AO4 band is (AO4).
  • Include counter-evidence and a writable vocabulary list on every card (AO3, AO4).

Typical mistakes

  • Building notes as summaries of sources. You will not have the summaries in the examination.
  • Memorising facts without memorising sentences. A fact you cannot phrase costs minutes you do not have.
  • Preparing only supporting evidence, so the concession has to be invented under pressure.
  • Listing vocabulary you can recognise but not write. Recognition vocabulary is not available for production.

Active revision

自分の課題の三つの側面それぞれについて、一枚のカードを作りなさい。各カードには、(一)年号を含む確かな事実、(二)出どころを示した解釈、(三)暗記する日本語の一文、(四)自分の立場に反する事実を一つ、(五)書ける語を八つ、を入れること。一週間後、カードを見ずにすべて書き出せるか試しなさい

Active recall

Recall the key points — then reveal.

Sources: Pearson Edexcel Level 3 Advanced GCE in Japanese (9JA0) specification (Pearson Edexcel)

§ 04

The three grids, and what each one is actually looking at#

●●●AdvancedLPPearson Edexcel 9JA0 Paper 1 Section C — AO4 out of 20, AO2 out of 10, AO3 out of 10LPPearson Edexcel 9JA0 Paper 1 — the AO4 and AO2 grids are presented side by sideLPDfE GCE AS and A level subject content for modern foreign languages

Key points

The AO4 grid, out of 20, assesses the content of your answer in relation to the knowledge and understanding of culture and society you have demonstrated, based on your research, and it also assesses your ability to critically analyse by sustaining a line of argument and drawing conclusions about aspects of culture and society, based on the question related to the research subject. Two things are being marked there and they are separable: what you know, and what you do with it. A candidate with excellent research and no argument, and a candidate with a clear argument and no research, both cap in the middle bands. The lower bands describe answers that rely on description rather than analysis, which is the same phrase the Paper 2 grids use and the same failure.
The AO2 grid, out of 10, assesses your understanding of the unseen text by your ability to use RELEVANT information from it to contribute to the ideas, arguments and conclusions you present on society and culture. Notice the wording: not to summarise the text, not to demonstrate that you read it, but to use relevant information from it to CONTRIBUTE. That means the text must do a job in your argument. A paragraph that summarises the text and then moves on has not contributed anything; a sentence that takes one thing from the text and uses it as evidence for a claim of yours has. This is why the specification prints the AO4 and AO2 grids side by side.
The AO3 grid, out of 10, is accuracy and range of language, and in this section the two are combined in one grid rather than separated as they are in Paper 2. That has a practical consequence: the trade-off between ambition and correctness is sharper here, because a risky construction that fails costs you on the same grid that it was meant to earn on. The sensible policy is the one the artistic-culture topic sets out — demonstrate range through the five structural groups you have prepared and can execute reliably, rather than by reaching for something you have never written before under a clock.
Reading the three grids together tells you how to spend 600 to 700 characters. Roughly half should be research substance and argument, because that is 20 of the 40 marks. Roughly a fifth should be visibly using the unseen text, because that is 10. And the whole must be accurate and varied, because that is the last 10 and it is earned everywhere rather than in one place. In paragraph terms: five paragraphs, of which three carry research and argument, one is built around the text, and one concludes — with the text also touched in at least one other paragraph so that its use does not look like a single obligatory box being ticked.
Worked example

Diagnosing a draft against the three grids

A draft answer on 高齢化社会 contains: two paragraphs of well-researched description of the care insurance system and of family care; one paragraph summarising the unseen text about a local community space; and a conclusion saying that the ageing society is a serious problem requiring effort from everyone. Diagnose it grid by grid.

  1. 01AO4, part one, knowledge: strong

    Two paragraphs of accurate researched content on a dated institution and on family care is genuine knowledge and understanding of society and culture based on research. That half of the AO4 grid is in good shape and the candidate should not spend revision time adding more facts. This diagnosis matters because the instinct on receiving a middling mark is always to add more content, and here more content is precisely what will not help.

  2. 02AO4, part two, argument: absent

    There is no line of argument. Two descriptive paragraphs and a general conclusion is the structure the lower bands describe as relying on description rather than analysis. The repair is not more research; it is a thesis. Something like 介護をめぐる問題は、支援が足りないことよりも、家族と社会のどちらが担うかが定まっていないことにあるのではないか converts both existing paragraphs into evidence for a claim without adding a single new fact.

  3. 03AO2: the text is summarised, not used

    A paragraph that summarises the community space and stops has demonstrated comprehension and contributed nothing. The grid asks for relevant information used to contribute to the ideas, arguments and conclusions. The repair: make the community space evidence for the thesis — 本文が紹介している場は、家族でも行政でもない第三の担い手が生まれていることを示している — which uses one detail from the text to advance the argument. Same text, same paragraph, entirely different mark.

  4. 04AO4 again: the conclusion is a platitude

    高齢化社会は深刻な問題であり、みんなで努力する必要がある could be written by somebody who had done no research at all, which is the test of a bad conclusion. The grid asks for conclusions drawn about aspects of culture and society. The repair follows from the thesis: 高齢化そのものよりも、担い手が決まっていないことが問題であり、地域の取り組みはその空白を埋める試みだと考えられる. That conclusion could only be written by somebody who wrote this essay.

  5. 05AO3: check what is not visible in the summary

    The diagnosis so far says nothing about language, which usually means the language is competent and unvaried — the commonest AO3 profile for a well-researched descriptive answer. Run the five-group checklist from the artistic-culture topic: aspect, cause, concession, stance, structure. A descriptive answer typically has cause and nothing else. Adding one concession (一方で), one stance form (のではないか) and one nominalised structure will move the grid without touching the content.

  6. 06The repair plan, in order of return

    First, write the thesis, because it is worth the most and it re-purposes everything already there. Second, convert the text paragraph from summary to evidence, which is the cheapest ten marks available. Third, rewrite the conclusion from the thesis. Fourth, add three structures from the checklist. Nothing in that list requires new research, and the whole repair is achievable in one redraft — which is why diagnosing by grid rather than by impression is worth the ten minutes it takes.

Result: Diagnosis: AO4 knowledge strong, AO4 argument absent, AO2 comprehension shown but not contributed, AO3 accurate but unvaried, conclusion a platitude. Repair, in order of return: state an arguable thesis that re-purposes the existing content; convert the text paragraph from summary to evidence for that thesis; rewrite the conclusion from the thesis; add a concession, a stance form and a nominalisation. No new research required.

Exam focus

  • AO4 marks BOTH what you know and what you argue. Prepare both (AO4).
  • The unseen text must contribute to your argument, not be summarised beside it (AO2).
  • AO3 here is accuracy AND range in one grid, so a failed risk costs twice (AO3).
  • Spend the characters in proportion: about half on research and argument, about a fifth on the text (AO2, AO4).

Typical mistakes

  • Excellent research with no line of argument. It caps in the middle bands, as does the reverse.
  • A paragraph that summarises the unseen text and then abandons it.
  • Attempting an unrehearsed construction. In this section accuracy and range share one grid.
  • Touching the text once, in one paragraph, so its use reads as an obligation rather than as evidence.

Active revision

自分が書いた四十点の答案を一つ取り出し、三つの観点で採点しなさい。(一)研究にもとづく知識と、議論の一貫性(二十点)、(二)未知の文章の情報を議論にどう使ったか(十点)、(三)正確さと表現の幅(十点)。それぞれについて、次に何を直すかを一文で書きなさい

Active recall

Recall the key points — then reveal.

Sources: Pearson Edexcel Level 3 Advanced GCE in Japanese (9JA0) specification (Pearson Edexcel)

§ 05

The eighty-five minutes, end to end#

●●●AdvancedLPPearson Edexcel 9JA0 Paper 1 Section C — recommended 1 hour 25 minutes, approximately 600-700 charactersLPPearson Edexcel 9JA0 Paper 1 — total 2 hours 30 minutes across three sectionsLPDfE GCE AS and A level subject content for modern foreign languages

Key points

The recommended timings for Paper 1 are 20 minutes for the translation, 45 for the reading, and 1 hour 25 for Section C, which totals 2 hours 30. Those timings are recommendations rather than rules, but the arithmetic is unforgiving: Section C is worth 40 of the paper's 80 marks, so a minute borrowed from it to finish a reading question is a bad trade at almost any exchange rate. Decide before the examination that you will begin Section C at the 65-minute mark whatever state the earlier sections are in, and treat that as a hard boundary. The single commonest way to lose marks on the largest task in the qualification is to arrive at it late.
Inside the 85 minutes, the shape that works is 10 minutes reading and planning, 65 writing, 10 checking. The first ten are the highest-value minutes in the paper and should be spent deliberately: read the statement and identify the claim inside it; read the unseen text once for its position rather than its detail; decide your thesis; and write a six-line plan in Japanese naming each paragraph's claim and its evidence. Do not begin writing before the plan exists — a Section C answer composed as it goes almost always loses its line of argument somewhere in the middle, and the AO4 grid is watching for exactly that.
The five-paragraph shape maps onto the grids. Paragraph one: concede whatever in the statement is documented, then state your arguable position. Paragraph two: your first research aspect as evidence. Paragraph three: the unseen text, used as evidence rather than summarised. Paragraph four: your second and third aspects, or one of them plus the concession that your counter-evidence supplies. Paragraph five: the conclusion, drawn at the strength your evidence supports. At about 130 characters each that lands inside 600 to 700, and the text is touched again briefly in paragraph four so that its use does not look like one obligatory paragraph.
The final ten minutes are for four checks in this order, because it puts the expensive errors first. One, coverage: have all three aspects of your research subject appeared? A missing aspect is an AO4 cap. Two, the text: does it contribute somewhere other than in its own paragraph? Three, register: read only the sentence endings and confirm they are uniform. Four, the specification's own fatal error classes: an unmarked change of subject, a particle wrong with a verb of giving or receiving, and any kanji you are not sure of, which should be converted to kana. Four checks, ten minutes, and they defend all three grids.
Worked example

The eighty-five minutes, run end to end on a worked statement

Your subject is 変わっていく行事. The unseen text describes a town that revived a lapsed festival with a committee of younger residents and a shorter programme. The statement is: 観光のために行事を変えることは、その行事の価値を失わせる。あなたはどう考えるか。Run the full 85 minutes.

  1. 01Minutes 0 to 3: read the statement and find the claim inside it

    The statement contains a causal claim — changing a festival FOR TOURISM causes it to lose its value — and a hidden premise, that value resides in the unchanged form. Two lines of attack are available: dispute the causation, or dispute the premise. The premise is the better target, because disputing causation would require evidence about many festivals that you do not have, while disputing the premise requires only an argument about what value means. Choose it, and you have your thesis in three minutes.

  2. 02Minutes 3 to 6: read the unseen text once, for position not detail

    Read to find out what the text would say if it could argue. Here it describes a revival with new organisers and a reduced programme — which is a case of change that preserved continuity of a kind. Note the one detail you will use and move on; you will reread the relevant sentence when you write paragraph three. Reading the text closely now costs minutes you will want later, and the AO2 grid asks for relevant information used, not for total comprehension.

  3. 03Minutes 6 to 10: write the plan, in Japanese, six lines

    One: 価値は形にあるのか。位置=形ではない。 Two: 伝統的な祭りと現代的な行事の境目はすでに曖昧(側面一)。 Three: 本文の例=担い手が受け継がれた(本文)。 Four: 観光の利益と決定権(側面二)+反論。 Five: 西洋行事も作りかえられて定着(側面三)。 Six: 結論=失われるのは形が変わるときではなく担い手が消えるとき。 Six lines, all three aspects present, the text placed, and the conclusion decided before a word of prose is written.

  4. 04Minutes 10 to 75: write, one paragraph at a time, checking the clock

    Thirteen minutes per paragraph is generous, so the pace is comfortable if the plan holds. Do not go back to improve a paragraph you have finished; in a foreign language under time pressure, revision usually adds errors, and the accuracy half of a combined 10-mark grid is not worth a lost paragraph. If you fall behind, compress paragraph five rather than the conclusion, because the third aspect can be covered in two sentences if it must while a missing conclusion costs the AO4 band outright.

  5. 05Minutes 75 to 85: the four checks, in order

    Coverage: are all three aspects visible? Paragraphs two, four and five, yes. The text: does it contribute in more than one place? Paragraph three plus one clause in paragraph four, yes. Register: read only the endings — である, ある, 示している, ないか, であろう — uniform plain register, yes. Fatal classes: scan for an unmarked change of subject, for giving-and-receiving particles, and for any uncertain kanji, converting those to kana. Ten minutes, four checks, done.

  6. 06And the discipline that makes the whole thing possible

    None of the above works unless you arrive at Section C on time and with memorised material. The 65-minute boundary in Paper 1 and the memorised cards from the previous section are the two decisions that make an 85-minute plan executable; without them, the ten minutes of planning become twenty minutes of trying to remember what you read in October. Both decisions are taken months before the examination, which is the real lesson of this topic.

Result: The routine: three minutes to find the claim inside the statement and choose whether to dispute its causation or its premise; three to read the unseen text for position; four to write a six-line Japanese plan covering all three aspects with the text placed and the conclusion decided; sixty-five to write five paragraphs of about 130 characters without going back; ten to check coverage, the text's contribution, register, and the specification's own fatal error classes — in that order.

Exam focus

  • Begin Section C at the 65-minute mark of Paper 1, whatever else is unfinished (AO4).
  • Ten minutes planning, sixty-five writing, ten checking (AO3, AO4).
  • Five paragraphs: concede and position, aspect, text as evidence, aspect plus concession, conclusion (AO4).
  • Check coverage, then the text's contribution, then register, then the fatal error classes (AO2, AO3, AO4).

Typical mistakes

  • Arriving at Section C late because a reading question was still unfinished. It is the worst trade in the paper.
  • Writing without a plan. The line of argument is what the AO4 grid is watching, and it goes first.
  • Confining the unseen text to one paragraph, so its use reads as an obligation.
  • Checking spelling before checking whether all three aspects appeared. One is cosmetic; the other is a cap.

Active revision

自分の課題について、未知の文章と、それに対する主張文を用意してもらいなさい。八十五分の制限時間で、十分計画・六十五分執筆・十分点検の配分で、六百字から七百字の答案を書きなさい。辞書も資料も使わないこと。終わったら、三つの側面がすべて出ているか、本文が二か所以上で使われているか、文体が統一されているかを確認しなさい

Active recall

Recall the key points — then reveal.

Sources: Pearson Edexcel Level 3 Advanced GCE in Japanese (9JA0) specification (Pearson Edexcel)

Contents

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    • 01What the independent research is, and where it is examined◐
    • 02The rules of the independent research, and what teachers may do◐
    • 03Research notes built to be memorised, because nothing may be taken in●
    • 04The three grids, and what each one is actually looking at●
    • 05The eighty-five minutes, end to end●

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The independent research and Paper 1 Section C — the largest single task in the qualification

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  • Pearson Edexcel Level 3 Advanced GCE in Japanese (9JA0) specification

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